i am going to space today i have been training for three years with five other people we are walking to our space ship i am really exited it is really hot in our ship.
OK we are now in the space ship we are getting every thing ready for launch OK every thing is ready.
is every one ready i said.9!.....8!.....7!.....6!..... 5!.....4!.....3!.....2!.....1! BLASTOFF.
OK we are now in the space ship we are getting every thing ready for launch OK every thing is ready.
is every one ready i said.9!.....8!.....7!.....6!..... 5!.....4!.....3!.....2!.....1! BLASTOFF.
Another tip, make your paragraphs longer
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